That's beautiful Sarah!

Hot damn, I'm glad I was soo lucky as to pop onto this page to see a nice little poem.

I want to comment on how nice it is, but I don't know where to start. Most poems have a rhyme or two in every other line, but your's seems to blend together into an entricate way to make a word-by-word song, or a slow and sad poem that would entertain anyone who has been in love and experienced the true happiness of the relationship, or the simple feeling of your love being returned. Those who have had their heart broken can look apon this poem, and be saddened, but at the same time feel respect for you and your work for the simple fact of it's use and just being here. I hope you relise that this poem touched my heart after I read it, and I can sympathis. I'm inlove. I'm in that head-over-your-heels crap, and I swear to god I'm never going to trip. Fall, trip, nothin'. I think I hit the jackpot on this one, and I hope that our relationship can blossom into something that you have.

And if you don't have it, I pray to God that he returns your feelings, for it can truly hurt to lose the one you have imagined growing old with, break your heart. I hope that you feel confident in your abilities all the same, nomatter what anyone will ever say.

And if you haven't already figured it out.. *favorites this, and all that good stuff* xD

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† R.I.P. Herbie - 4:15 PM, 11/04/05 †

And while everything seems to be going under
I just want it to all be the same

Thank-you so much for taking the time to read the poem! Im very happy for you, though admittedly, for my love to be requited it might take some time! I hope it happens faster for you!

I am touched that this poem brought so much up for you and thanks again for the favourite!!!

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We're so pretty
Oh so pretty
We're vacant

Thank-you! I am very mushy ....

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We're so pretty
Oh so pretty
We're vacant

Sarah, I've got another six hours or so before I get home and you've gone and written something that makes me want to be there more than I can stand. I'm actually having to stop myself from crying because I'm in an internet cafe in Sydney.

you're an awful person, but I forgive you because you're brilliant.

Ps. We must talk further, I'll be on the phone at some point.

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Grammar are for squares!

Wow. If I hadnt given up on love entirely, I'd almost be tempted to be moved.
And from my withered and shriveled soul, thats high praise indeed.

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Weave a circle round him thrice
And close your eyes with holy dread;
For he on honeydew hath fed
And drunk the milk of paradise.

-Coleridge, S.T. "Kubla Kahn"

Thanks man. I'm glad that it did tempt you.

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We're so pretty
Oh so pretty
We're vacant

nice vary nice

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the rose has guided me to the direction of my destiney